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PostSubject: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 4:23 am

Just Kidding

I keep waiting for the phone to ring
Yet I know it won't be you
I try to fill my life with busyness
Yet all I do is think of you.

What became of us
And all our dreams and plan
How could you turn and walk away
As I watched our castles turn to sand?

Do you never even miss me
Don't you long to caress my face
How could you forget so easily
And You I can't erase?

I want to be in your arms again
To see the laughter in your eyes
But I guess the joke's on me
And Oh! Was I surprised!
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 4:46 am

I try to fill my life with busyness....
akan lebih baik kalo kata busyness di ganti ama "activity"
karena dalam konteks ini busyness kan itu sebuah aktivitas bukan bisnis...
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 4:51 am

Busyness bukan bisiness... tapi Busy = sibuk jadinya kesibukan Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 4:55 am

kalo pake activity lebih enak kayaknya...kan activity bisa diartikan kesibukan juga...
ex: what is your activity? = apa aktivitasmu? / apa kegiatanmu? / apa kesibukanmu

sekian dari guru bhs inggris...XD
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:01 am

thx... Smile
hehehhe

tapi pas terinspirasi kata2nya yg ada di otak cuma itu...
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:03 am

hehehehehe
poetnya keren juga tuh....
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:21 am

thx... Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:24 am

hahahah

±Scoth guru bahasa inggris

hahahaha
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 5:33 am

nein ich kann nich spreche english ich bin auslander...
cari sendiri apa artinya...
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Sat Aug 09, 2008 6:29 am

kaya na pink beneran ce romantis yah
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PostSubject: Re: Just Kidding   Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:02 pm

hmmm setahu saia kalo nulis puisi yang langsung dari otak... ada baiknya apa yang terlintas di pikiran itu yang di tulis, cos penggunaan kata juga bisa menjadi penyalur emosi sang pembuat... hhehe...

se tau saia itu....

maaf saia bukan guru... ^^
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